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The Story of Life by ~SonofaServant:iconSonofaServant:



Obliterated with water,
Blessed by grace;
Taught with wisdom,
Seen by His holy face

Consumed by fire
At the beginning of end;
Layed in the Kingdom,
To restore amend

Now it is finished,
New Jerusalem wakes;
What Lucifer forgoes
In the fiery lakes.
©2007-2009 ~SonofaServant
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Author's Comments

I'm trying to remember if what I wrote is a limerick or not...It's hard to remember the difference when you haven't done literature sice May. ^__^

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:iconjellolids:
I don't think it is. It doesn't have the right meter, and a limerick has five lines per stanza.

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"There are strange things done in the midnight sun
By the men who moil for gold
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
That would make your blood run cold..."
- "The Cremation of Sam McGee", by Robert W. Service
:iconculexknight:
It's not.

This is well written, and I like it very much so.

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"He is my disciple no more. Beat the drum, my little ones, and attack him; you have my permission."
:iconhuggsythebear:
He has holes in his face? O:
:iconsonofaservant:
Huggsy's a funny bear.

--
I have a great, big God
who is always by my side,
I have a great, big God
by my side, by my side

~Richard Ntim: Missionary of Christ to Ghana, Africa

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